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Authored by: Tkilgore on Wednesday, March 13 2013 @ 01:16 AM EDT |
> Thanks. Since you have done the work it was best to send it to PJ.
> It is my draft that is completed. Nothing is finished until PJ says so.
Please do keep in mind that I am not the expert on these issues that either of
you are, and I know this very well.
Understand that what I was trying to do is to figure out what you were trying to
say and to insert what I characterized in an earlier post as the missing
"glue." If I have changed the essential meaning in any part of the
document it was inadvertent and unintended. I think I have helped with the
readability and connectedness of the document, and I thought it is important for
that to get done. But you be the judge of what I did. Use any of it that you
want, or use none of it if you think I changed things too much here and there.
Mainly, I was just lucky to have time to do this because it is the middle of
Spring Break. For me, it is much more important that the response for input is
answered, and that the response should be taken seriously, than is the issue of
who wrote it.[ Reply to This | Parent | # ]
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